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Question: I am applying to a program where you learn more about math and computer programming. I have to write a 150-word response about myself and why I want to apply. This is my response so far: "Hello Sir/Ma'am. I am Sebastian Monterroso, a 12th grade student at Cold Spring Harbor Jr/Sr High School. About last year, I heard through my homeschool social network about an event on the subject of AI that Jane Street was hosting. From the beginning, I was captivated by the security of the escorts who took us to the event, to the gourmet appetizers, to the take-home gifts, and that's not even mentioning the event itself. I have a small background in math and educational programs and love learning about the applications of math everywhere from astronomy to statistics to acoustics. Now, unlike many of my peers at my school, I never fervently pursued computer science as a hobby or project. In fact I've hardly ever coded before this year, but I'm really compelled to learn more in the future about computer science and how it works, because it's just so cool to learn. I want to participate in AMP principally to foster my growth in learning different concepts in math and programming, but also to spend a summer in the great New York City with others my age who also love similar things to what I love. No matter what happens in the program, I'll be able to learn simply from hanging out with the other participants of AMP." What parts of this are unnecessary and can be truncated to fit the 150-word target?
Your response contains some details that are interesting but can be trimmed to fit the 150-word limit. Here’s a more concise version, focusing on key points: --- Hello Sir/Ma'am. I am Sebastian Monterroso, a 12th-grade student at Cold Spring Harbor Jr/Sr High School. Last year, I attended an AI event hosted by Jane Street, which sparked my interest in computer science. Despite having limited coding experience, I am eager to learn more about programming and its applications. I have a passion for math and enjoy exploring its uses in various fields, from astronomy to statistics. I want to participate in AMP to enhance my understanding of math and programming, and to connect with peers who share my interests. Spending a summer in New York City with like-minded individuals would be a valuable and enriching experience for me. Through AMP, I hope to grow academically and personally, while contributing my enthusiasm for learning and collaboration. --- This revised response is around 140 words, which fits the requirement while maintaining the essential points about your background and motivation.
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