The best revision for clarity and flow is: **D. Sawyer smiled as she left the store with the sudden realization that she just might be making a new friend.**

D. Sawyer smiled as she left the store with the sudden realization that she just might be making a new friend.

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Question: "(41) Sawyer smiled with the sudden realization that what she just might be making was a new friend as she left the store." What revision, if any, should be made in sentence 41? A.With the sudden realization that she just might be as she left the store making a new friend, Sawyer smiled. B.Sawyer smiled as she left the store and the sudden realization that she just might be making a new friend. C.No change is needed. D.Sawyer smiled as she left the store with the sudden realization that she just might be making a new friend.

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D. Sawyer smiled as she left the store with the sudden realization that she just might be making a new friend. This revision improves the clarity and flow of the sentence.

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Feb. 13, 2025, 7:28 a.m.

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B. She had landed the perfect job, stocking shelves at a local grocery store.

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D. She was poised to place a can of tomato sauce on its designated shelf when a raucous voice from behind startled her, causing her to shriek and toss the can over her shoulder.

C. Change the comma after designs to a semicolon

Ask AI: What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 4? Change past to passed Change is to are Change from to through No change is needed.

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