**Crimson Nights**
The night throbbed with music that was more heartbeat than beat. Deep in the heart of the city, Velvet 44 was where lovers came to forget and strangers came to become legends. Behind the bar, morphing color and shadow, stood its owner: Jess Lane. At 23, Jess wore her black hair slicked, eyes marked with kohl, skin luminescent as moonlight—almost as if she belonged more to shadow than wake. But she was real, visceral, grounded—right until the night the woman in the crimson dress appeared.
*
It was late, just before the club's witching hour, when Jess saw her. The woman stepped from the blackness beyond Velvet’s doors, eyes the color of old wine glinting beneath long, severe bangs, lips almost blue. Her presence sucked the air from the room—patrons stumbled over their tongues, conversations stuttered. Jess frowned, unease pricking her every nerve, yet she couldn’t look away.
The woman approached the bar, resting cool, white hands on polished wood. She wore no jewelry, only an ancient locket hanging heavy on her throat. She looked hungry in a way that was not about food, her stare burrowed under Jess’s skin, leaving a shiver in its wake.
“What’ll it be?” Jess asked, masking nerves with bravado.
“Water.” The woman’s voice was velvet, old and beautiful, frayed at the edges.
Jess slid the glass across. The woman curled her fingers around it, her gaze never leaving Jess’s. The club’s lights flared red, bouncing off her dress. Jess felt her heartbeat echo in her throat—rapidfire.
“You’re not from around here,” Jess heard herself say.
“That’s true.” She smiled, not with her lips, but with something else.
“Are you afraid of me?”
Jess blinked. “Not exactly.”
The woman’s eyes lingered on Jess’s wrist—a strange, weighted moment that burned with unsaid things. Jess watched the longing unspool in her eyes, saw the war flicker behind her stillness.
“Sometimes people come here looking for something they’re afraid to name,” Jess said softly.
The woman’s throat worked. “You’re very perceptive.”
Something inside Jess—an old instinct, maybe—shouted a warning. But she hushed it. Something in those wine-dark eyes was afraid—of herself, of Jess. The knowing gutted Jess. She pressed her wrist onto bar-top lacquer, turning it palm-up. The veins shone faint and blue beneath her pale skin.
“Will this help?” she asked, voice so low it was nearly a whisper.
The woman jerked back as if struck, a hiss in her breath. For a flash, her eyes were pure panic. “No. No…” she said. “I didn’t mean—”
Jess, heart pounding, said, “You wouldn’t hurt me. I know you wouldn’t.” She moved closer, compelled by empathy she didn’t quite understand. Maybe it was the loneliness she recognized in the woman—deep, starless midnight loneliness.
Jess felt the air between them crackle, charged. Slowly, she leaned forward, holding her wrist tantalizingly close—felt the club, the world, distill down to the two of them. The woman’s nostrils flared, her eyes slammed shut. For a heartbeat Jess thought it was over, that she’d misread, that this was all some odd hallucination pulled from too little sleep and too many horror movies.
Then, something inside the woman seemed to snap; her body rigid, gaze gone wild, she snatched Jess’s wrist—but not with violence—with trembling desperation, and pressed her lips to Jess’s skin.
Jess didn’t flinch. She braced herself for pain, for the sharpness of fangs or agony of emptied veins. Instead, there was a gentle prick, a warm pressure, and an uncanny electric thrill that traveled up her arm. The woman drank—not with greed but with restraint, as if at war with herself—just a few drops.
It was over in a moment. The woman drew back, shame rounding her shoulders, lips stained red. Jess swayed with lightness she hadn’t expected.
The woman’s eyes shimmered with tears. “I’m sorry—I just—sometimes it’s too much.” Her voice broke like glass.
“It’s okay.” Jess covered the bite with a cocktail napkin, steady but shaken. “You controlled yourself. That’s more than most.”
For the first time, the woman truly smiled—and it nearly undid Jess. “Thank you… I haven’t taken only a sip in… years. You helped me remember I’m not lost.”
Jess felt something inside her shift as well, a kernel of understanding blooming. “Maybe you’re not as alone as you think.”
The woman took Jess’s hand briefly. Her touch lingered long after she let go. “My name is Mireille.”
From that night, neither would forget the crackle of possibility in the air—nor the sense that their destinies had tangled, just as surely as blood and hunger. In the weeks that followed, Mireille came back to Velvet 44, each time drinking just a little less from Jess. In that lingering darkness, a mystery bloomed—a partnership formed across thresholds both literal and supernatural, both learning to trust, both daring to hope that in the city’s most shadowed hours, every monster might yet be met with mercy.
And every offering of blood might be the beginning… not of an ending—but of understanding.
This story was generated by user jess.jessie0 with assistance by one of OpenAI’s large-scale language-generation model; prompts used to help generate the story are shown below.
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Prompt: Write a long story about a young nightclub owner who offered her blood to a vampire. The young club owner saw the vampire back away in fear and knew she didn't mean to hurt her. Still, the woman saw the hunger in her eyes and, not quite knowing why, wanted to help her and moved her wrist closer to her mouth. Finally, she noticed something inside the vampire had snapped and bit her wrist, but only took a few drops of blood.
Response: **Crimson Nights** The night throbbed with music that was more heartbeat than beat. Deep in the heart of the city, Velvet 44 was where lovers came to forget and strangers came to become legends. Behind the bar, morphing color and shadow, stood its owner: Jess Lane. At 23, Jess wore her black hair slicked, eyes marked with kohl, skin luminescent as moonlight—almost as if she belonged more to shadow than wake. But she was real, visceral, grounded—right until the night the woman in the crimson dress appeared. * It was late, just before the club's witching hour, when Jess saw her. The woman stepped from the blackness beyond Velvet’s doors, eyes the color of old wine glinting beneath long, severe bangs, lips almost blue. Her presence sucked the air from the room—patrons stumbled over their tongues, conversations stuttered. Jess frowned, unease pricking her every nerve, yet she couldn’t look away. The woman approached the bar, resting cool, white hands on polished wood. She wore no jewelry, only an ancient locket hanging heavy on her throat. She looked hungry in a way that was not about food, her stare burrowed under Jess’s skin, leaving a shiver in its wake. “What’ll it be?” Jess asked, masking nerves with bravado. “Water.” The woman’s voice was velvet, old and beautiful, frayed at the edges. Jess slid the glass across. The woman curled her fingers around it, her gaze never leaving Jess’s. The club’s lights flared red, bouncing off her dress. Jess felt her heartbeat echo in her throat—rapidfire. “You’re not from around here,” Jess heard herself say. “That’s true.” She smiled, not with her lips, but with something else. “Are you afraid of me?” Jess blinked. “Not exactly.” The woman’s eyes lingered on Jess’s wrist—a strange, weighted moment that burned with unsaid things. Jess watched the longing unspool in her eyes, saw the war flicker behind her stillness. “Sometimes people come here looking for something they’re afraid to name,” Jess said softly. The woman’s throat worked. “You’re very perceptive.” Something inside Jess—an old instinct, maybe—shouted a warning. But she hushed it. Something in those wine-dark eyes was afraid—of herself, of Jess. The knowing gutted Jess. She pressed her wrist onto bar-top lacquer, turning it palm-up. The veins shone faint and blue beneath her pale skin. “Will this help?” she asked, voice so low it was nearly a whisper. The woman jerked back as if struck, a hiss in her breath. For a flash, her eyes were pure panic. “No. No…” she said. “I didn’t mean—” Jess, heart pounding, said, “You wouldn’t hurt me. I know you wouldn’t.” She moved closer, compelled by empathy she didn’t quite understand. Maybe it was the loneliness she recognized in the woman—deep, starless midnight loneliness. Jess felt the air between them crackle, charged. Slowly, she leaned forward, holding her wrist tantalizingly close—felt the club, the world, distill down to the two of them. The woman’s nostrils flared, her eyes slammed shut. For a heartbeat Jess thought it was over, that she’d misread, that this was all some odd hallucination pulled from too little sleep and too many horror movies. Then, something inside the woman seemed to snap; her body rigid, gaze gone wild, she snatched Jess’s wrist—but not with violence—with trembling desperation, and pressed her lips to Jess’s skin. Jess didn’t flinch. She braced herself for pain, for the sharpness of fangs or agony of emptied veins. Instead, there was a gentle prick, a warm pressure, and an uncanny electric thrill that traveled up her arm. The woman drank—not with greed but with restraint, as if at war with herself—just a few drops. It was over in a moment. The woman drew back, shame rounding her shoulders, lips stained red. Jess swayed with lightness she hadn’t expected. The woman’s eyes shimmered with tears. “I’m sorry—I just—sometimes it’s too much.” Her voice broke like glass. “It’s okay.” Jess covered the bite with a cocktail napkin, steady but shaken. “You controlled yourself. That’s more than most.” For the first time, the woman truly smiled—and it nearly undid Jess. “Thank you… I haven’t taken only a sip in… years. You helped me remember I’m not lost.” Jess felt something inside her shift as well, a kernel of understanding blooming. “Maybe you’re not as alone as you think.” The woman took Jess’s hand briefly. Her touch lingered long after she let go. “My name is Mireille.” From that night, neither would forget the crackle of possibility in the air—nor the sense that their destinies had tangled, just as surely as blood and hunger. In the weeks that followed, Mireille came back to Velvet 44, each time drinking just a little less from Jess. In that lingering darkness, a mystery bloomed—a partnership formed across thresholds both literal and supernatural, both learning to trust, both daring to hope that in the city’s most shadowed hours, every monster might yet be met with mercy. And every offering of blood might be the beginning… not of an ending—but of understanding.
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