Title: "Veiled Aggression"
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Under velvet light, the hum of bass rising through the soles of her boots, Sela rested in the shadows of her private booth. The club was packed tonight, neon blues and magentas reflecting off swirling dancers, laughter and smoke entwined, but Sela sat apart—her own little walled kingdom of silence and dim glass. She sipped her drink, biting the rim, palms damp around the tumbler. Outside, she was the queen of illusions; inside, worry gnawed at her, sharp as broken ice.
She remembered the first time she’d seen the elf. Not in her club, but outside—cornered by alley lights, desperate, proud, and bristling as a wolf. Then, he’d cursed her offer of help, spitting out words like stones, eyes like winter and anger that made her catch her breath. Yet she had seen something else beneath the veiled aggression, a fracture she recognized in herself.
In truth, she barely knew why she kept this promise to herself, this silent vow to help him. Maybe it was the echo of her sister’s voice, lost somewhere in the world. Maybe it was the darkness she carried, the ache for tethering herself to something—someone. The promise shimmered, a lifeline thrown into unknown waters.
Tonight, she waited, the tension scattered through her limbs. She let her eyes flick to the side: the club’s door, tunneled with pale light, opening and closing as faces came and went. Time ticked by as she watched. He was late, or maybe he’d changed his mind. It wouldn’t be the strangest thing for disappointment to visit her. She resigned herself, her mind spinning with faces and possibilities, with old dread rising, raw and physical.
Then, movement—a shadow long and silvery at the periphery. He stepped from the crowd, the strange stillness around him marking his difference even in a sea of spectacle. Silken hair, sharp gaze, clothes that must once have been fine but now bore the marks of want. He crossed to her booth without hesitating, pushing through the curtain. That air of arrogance had gentled, just slightly, and she felt her pulse stutter.
She was startled by how she noticed small things: the pointed arch of his ear beneath tousled hair, limned in blue light; the way his eyes—once filled with scorn—now watched her with wary calculation, as if measuring her soul. He did not sit; he waited, standing close enough that she could feel the ghost of his presence, heat radiating between them, night-chilled and star-bright.
Was she afraid? The thought came unbidden when he looked at her, chest rising and falling with the weight of unsaid things. Once, she would have laughed; now, a shiver ran along her arms, settling somewhere deep in her chest. She realized, with a guilty thrill, that fear and excitement twined together so tightly she could not untangle them. It had been years since she felt this way—since the night her sister vanished, dragging joy and terror and hope away with her.
The elf’s nearness pulled her from the undertow of old grief. She was hyperaware of her body: the way her legs pressed together beneath the table, the prickle of sweat at the base of her neck, the quick beating of her heart. He was beautiful, yes, but beauty here was a dangerous thing—a blade, a secret. His proximity was an omen. Part of her wanted to reach out, to test the reality of him, to see if he’d flinch or freeze.
As he began to speak—the first words she had heard him utter without venom—Sela found the world narrowing to the booth, the hush between beats, the electric possibility in the air. His voice, softened but still rough with suspicion and longing, tumbled through her, and for a moment, she forgot everything else. The club faded: no lost sister, no crushing responsibility, no old wounds or debts or grief. Just this new connection, fragile as blown glass, born in the space between fear and hope.
Her body responded before she could marshal her thoughts. She leaned forward, breath shallowed, mouth parted. Her hand trembled on her glass. Her gaze flickered over his face, searching for a sign, a promise. She burned with the ache of wanting to be known, to be trusted, to help and to heal—not just him, but herself.
For the first time in years, something broke through the numbness—the relentless parade of nights, the weight of memory. With him, possibility blossomed. In the shadowed hush, Sela lost herself, if only for one trembling, hopeful moment, to what might be.
This story was generated by user baebae91 with assistance by one of OpenAI’s large-scale language-generation model; prompts used to help generate the story are shown below.
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AI Prompts
Prompt: Write a very long story about how a young nightclub owner was sitting in her private booth and having a drink and waited for the elf she wanted to help to come. Write how after a while an elf entered the booth and offered to help him. At first, when she met him, he was rude. And now he asked if she wasn't afraid that he would do something to her. She felt a shiver of fear and excitement, something she hadn't felt since her sister's disappearance. Describe her feelings and reactions when the man entered and finally began to speak. Describe how her body reacted to his proximity and describe how with him she forgot about her problems and her missing sister for a moment. Write everything without dialogues, just the young owner's thoughts and feelings.
Response: Under velvet light, the hum of bass rising through the soles of her boots, Sela rested in the shadows of her private booth. The club was packed tonight, neon blues and magentas reflecting off swirling dancers, laughter and smoke entwined, but Sela sat apart—her own little walled kingdom of silence and dim glass. She sipped her drink, biting the rim, palms damp around the tumbler. Outside, she was the queen of illusions; inside, worry gnawed at her, sharp as broken ice. She remembered the first time she’d seen the elf. Not in her club, but outside—cornered by alley lights, desperate, proud, and bristling as a wolf. Then, he’d cursed her offer of help, spitting out words like stones, eyes like winter and anger that made her catch her breath. Yet she had seen something else beneath the veiled aggression, a fracture she recognized in herself. In truth, she barely knew why she kept this promise to herself, this silent vow to help him. Maybe it was the echo of her sister’s voice, lost somewhere in the world. Maybe it was the darkness she carried, the ache for tethering herself to something—someone. The promise shimmered, a lifeline thrown into unknown waters. Tonight, she waited, the tension scattered through her limbs. She let her eyes flick to the side: the club’s door, tunneled with pale light, opening and closing as faces came and went. Time ticked by as she watched. He was late, or maybe he’d changed his mind. It wouldn’t be the strangest thing for disappointment to visit her. She resigned herself, her mind spinning with faces and possibilities, with old dread rising, raw and physical. Then, movement—a shadow long and silvery at the periphery. He stepped from the crowd, the strange stillness around him marking his difference even in a sea of spectacle. Silken hair, sharp gaze, clothes that must once have been fine but now bore the marks of want. He crossed to her booth without hesitating, pushing through the curtain. That air of arrogance had gentled, just slightly, and she felt her pulse stutter. She was startled by how she noticed small things: the pointed arch of his ear beneath tousled hair, limned in blue light; the way his eyes—once filled with scorn—now watched her with wary calculation, as if measuring her soul. He did not sit; he waited, standing close enough that she could feel the ghost of his presence, heat radiating between them, night-chilled and star-bright. Was she afraid? The thought came unbidden when he looked at her, chest rising and falling with the weight of unsaid things. Once, she would have laughed; now, a shiver ran along her arms, settling somewhere deep in her chest. She realized, with a guilty thrill, that fear and excitement twined together so tightly she could not untangle them. It had been years since she felt this way—since the night her sister vanished, dragging joy and terror and hope away with her. The elf’s nearness pulled her from the undertow of old grief. She was hyperaware of her body: the way her legs pressed together beneath the table, the prickle of sweat at the base of her neck, the quick beating of her heart. He was beautiful, yes, but beauty here was a dangerous thing—a blade, a secret. His proximity was an omen. Part of her wanted to reach out, to test the reality of him, to see if he’d flinch or freeze. As he began to speak—the first words she had heard him utter without venom—Sela found the world narrowing to the booth, the hush between beats, the electric possibility in the air. His voice, softened but still rough with suspicion and longing, tumbled through her, and for a moment, she forgot everything else. The club faded: no lost sister, no crushing responsibility, no old wounds or debts or grief. Just this new connection, fragile as blown glass, born in the space between fear and hope. Her body responded before she could marshal her thoughts. She leaned forward, breath shallowed, mouth parted. Her hand trembled on her glass. Her gaze flickered over his face, searching for a sign, a promise. She burned with the ache of wanting to be known, to be trusted, to help and to heal—not just him, but herself. For the first time in years, something broke through the numbness—the relentless parade of nights, the weight of memory. With him, possibility blossomed. In the shadowed hush, Sela lost herself, if only for one trembling, hopeful moment, to what might be.
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