The city pulsed with after-midnight energy, yet Renée felt all alone, an island in the neon tide. She moved through shadowed streets as if drawn by a hidden string, her heart beating with an anticipation she couldn't explain. That night—long past when honest people had gone to sleep—Bellevue Avenue was alive with those who sought the uncanny. It was here, on the fringe of what everyone else was willing to see, where Renée’s life would change forever.
The old clock tower chimed two as Renée reached the iron gates of St. Catherine’s cemetery. She could sense someone there, just beyond—in the hush, in the slant of the moon through the clouds. Her footsteps faltered on the gravel, but she didn't stop.
And then she saw her.
The woman was already waiting, half-silhouetted by the lamplight. Broad eyes, as pale and endless as melting ice, searched Renée’s face. The woman’s lips curved into a gentle, mournful smile, revealing nothing of what Renée thought she’d see—no fangs, yet—but it was there: an otherness, ancient and subdued.
Renée’s heart lurched. She was not afraid.
They stood together for a moment, in silence thick with unspoken bargains.
“I knew you’d come,” Renée said, not quite sure what compelled her to believe it.
The woman glanced down, the shadows dancing over her high cheekbones. “Why are you here?” Her voice was music, both young and ageless.
Renée took a breath. “Because I know what you are.”
The woman tensed. The earth seemed to wait, leaves barely whispering in the midnight breeze. “You shouldn’t,” said the woman, “and yet you do.”
Renée stepped closer, raising her left hand, palm outward—a silent offering. “I… I’ve seen you before. You come to the café sometimes, in the evenings. You never order anything, you don’t speak. But your eyes—” She swallowed. “Your eyes are always so sad, so hungry.”
The woman’s eyes flashed in the low light. She looked at Renée, appraising, searching. “And you still came?”
Renée’s voice trembled. “Yes. I want to know what you feel. And besides…” A wistful smile curled her lips. “Loneliness recognizes loneliness.”
For a moment, the woman said nothing, caught between desire and reluctance. But at last, very gently, she took Renée’s hand in both of hers. Her skin was cool, impossibly soft.
“Are you sure?”
Renée nodded, pulse hammering in her throat. “I want to see the world through your hunger, if only for a moment.”
The moon, now fully revealed, cast silver on the gravestones as the woman guided Renée’s wrist upwards. The world shrank to this single, trembling instant.
Renée braced herself—she expected a sharp, tearing agony. Yet the vampire’s mouth opened, lips cool as midnight dew, pressing lightly to the inside of her wrist. There was the briefest prick—a sensation of sharpness, but immediately it gave way to a profound warmth, as though a gentle current was drawing her out. She felt no fear, only a languorous relief, her worries bleeding seamlessly into the night’s quiet embrace.
A soft thrumming pulsed at her wrist, beats echoing her heart. She felt the pull, gentle and deliberate, not at all like the desperate savagery she’d imagined. Instead, she found herself sinking into a hush, her every nerve attuned to the shared secret.
The woman’s eyes darkened as she drank, and for a moment, Renée saw flashes: a riverbank at dawn, a crumbling cathedral in Eastern Europe, a parade of faces—lovers, friends, all lost to time. The woman trembled and broke away, quickly closing the wound with her tongue—a slow sweep that left only a faint chill behind.
Renée swayed, dizzied. But there was clarity, too—an understanding that their loneliness had been shared.
Gently, the woman pressed Renée’s wrist to her chest. “Why did you allow me?”
Renée took a shaky breath. “Because I see myself in you. Night after night, I watch you watching, from the edge of everything. I know you feel you're a monster, but… monsters sometimes only want to be understood.” She blinked, fighting tears. “You looked at me like you recognized me, too. In the way lonely people do.”
The woman’s gaze shimmered, sadness and wonder intertwining. “You are braver than you know,” she said softly. “Would you do this again?”
Renée smiled—not for courage, but in solidarity. “I think I already have, in dreams, countless times.”
The silence returned, no longer oppressive but filled with possibility. Through the city, the clock tower’s bells tolled three, washing them in time’s mournful melody. Renée knew her life was forever changed, marked not by pain but by tenderness—and by the gentle memory of a monster’s grateful mouth.
And so the city pressed on, unaware that two women—inhumanly similar, impossibly different—had found each other in the dark, and made peace the only way the lost ever do: by sharing what little warmth remained.
This story was generated by user beno.billy with assistance by one of OpenAI’s large-scale language-generation model; prompts used to help generate the story are shown below.
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Prompt: Write a long story about how a young woman allowed a vampire to drink her blood from her wrist. Describe what she felt when the vampire dug her fangs into her wrist. The woman expected pain, but the vampire was very gentle. Have the woman tell the vampire why she allowed her to drink her blood and why she recognized her as a vampire.
Response: The city pulsed with after-midnight energy, yet Renée felt all alone, an island in the neon tide. She moved through shadowed streets as if drawn by a hidden string, her heart beating with an anticipation she couldn't explain. That night—long past when honest people had gone to sleep—Bellevue Avenue was alive with those who sought the uncanny. It was here, on the fringe of what everyone else was willing to see, where Renée’s life would change forever. The old clock tower chimed two as Renée reached the iron gates of St. Catherine’s cemetery. She could sense someone there, just beyond—in the hush, in the slant of the moon through the clouds. Her footsteps faltered on the gravel, but she didn't stop. And then she saw her. The woman was already waiting, half-silhouetted by the lamplight. Broad eyes, as pale and endless as melting ice, searched Renée’s face. The woman’s lips curved into a gentle, mournful smile, revealing nothing of what Renée thought she’d see—no fangs, yet—but it was there: an otherness, ancient and subdued. Renée’s heart lurched. She was not afraid. They stood together for a moment, in silence thick with unspoken bargains. “I knew you’d come,” Renée said, not quite sure what compelled her to believe it. The woman glanced down, the shadows dancing over her high cheekbones. “Why are you here?” Her voice was music, both young and ageless. Renée took a breath. “Because I know what you are.” The woman tensed. The earth seemed to wait, leaves barely whispering in the midnight breeze. “You shouldn’t,” said the woman, “and yet you do.” Renée stepped closer, raising her left hand, palm outward—a silent offering. “I… I’ve seen you before. You come to the café sometimes, in the evenings. You never order anything, you don’t speak. But your eyes—” She swallowed. “Your eyes are always so sad, so hungry.” The woman’s eyes flashed in the low light. She looked at Renée, appraising, searching. “And you still came?” Renée’s voice trembled. “Yes. I want to know what you feel. And besides…” A wistful smile curled her lips. “Loneliness recognizes loneliness.” For a moment, the woman said nothing, caught between desire and reluctance. But at last, very gently, she took Renée’s hand in both of hers. Her skin was cool, impossibly soft. “Are you sure?” Renée nodded, pulse hammering in her throat. “I want to see the world through your hunger, if only for a moment.” The moon, now fully revealed, cast silver on the gravestones as the woman guided Renée’s wrist upwards. The world shrank to this single, trembling instant. Renée braced herself—she expected a sharp, tearing agony. Yet the vampire’s mouth opened, lips cool as midnight dew, pressing lightly to the inside of her wrist. There was the briefest prick—a sensation of sharpness, but immediately it gave way to a profound warmth, as though a gentle current was drawing her out. She felt no fear, only a languorous relief, her worries bleeding seamlessly into the night’s quiet embrace. A soft thrumming pulsed at her wrist, beats echoing her heart. She felt the pull, gentle and deliberate, not at all like the desperate savagery she’d imagined. Instead, she found herself sinking into a hush, her every nerve attuned to the shared secret. The woman’s eyes darkened as she drank, and for a moment, Renée saw flashes: a riverbank at dawn, a crumbling cathedral in Eastern Europe, a parade of faces—lovers, friends, all lost to time. The woman trembled and broke away, quickly closing the wound with her tongue—a slow sweep that left only a faint chill behind. Renée swayed, dizzied. But there was clarity, too—an understanding that their loneliness had been shared. Gently, the woman pressed Renée’s wrist to her chest. “Why did you allow me?” Renée took a shaky breath. “Because I see myself in you. Night after night, I watch you watching, from the edge of everything. I know you feel you're a monster, but… monsters sometimes only want to be understood.” She blinked, fighting tears. “You looked at me like you recognized me, too. In the way lonely people do.” The woman’s gaze shimmered, sadness and wonder intertwining. “You are braver than you know,” she said softly. “Would you do this again?” Renée smiled—not for courage, but in solidarity. “I think I already have, in dreams, countless times.” The silence returned, no longer oppressive but filled with possibility. Through the city, the clock tower’s bells tolled three, washing them in time’s mournful melody. Renée knew her life was forever changed, marked not by pain but by tenderness—and by the gentle memory of a monster’s grateful mouth. And so the city pressed on, unaware that two women—inhumanly similar, impossibly different—had found each other in the dark, and made peace the only way the lost ever do: by sharing what little warmth remained.
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