The radiant neon sign of “Pulse” flickered to life as a sullen dusk dragged itself across the city. Underneath it, Remy Santoro eyed her phone, watching the time click down to opening hour. Another Friday, another crowd to please.
She stood behind the counter, sleeves rolled up, steam wafting from buckets as she sterilized the glittering stemware. The synth-pop bass line pumping through the club’s surround sound vibrated rhythmically through the lacquered bar. Summer air slipped in from the open back doors, carrying a whiff of traffic and the distant honking of impatient cab drivers. For Remy, the routine would have felt almost soothing—memories transmuted into muscle memory, her hands moving faster than her thoughts: flick, dip, wipe, stack.
Someone had spray painted a mural of swirling abstract shapes and ghostly faces across the back wall the week she took ownership, one month after Claudia vanished. Remy never bothered repainting it, though she hated how the hollow eyes seemed fixed on her every night.
She tried to focus on the night ahead. The playlist was set. The VIP tables dusted and glimmering under the track lights. Crystal clear bottle service menus aligned with military precision. Staff jackets ironed. But the tranquil momentum betrayed her; just as she reached for another glass, her hand began to tremble.
She pictured Claudia’s favorite lipstick, half-forgotten in Remy’s clutch purse—bubblegum pink, with a stubborn flame mark on the tip. Claudia had only just turned twenty, barely legal, and already so wild about the world—she was always swooning over the impossible things. Dip-dye hair, jangling bracelets, a voice too big for her crackling frame. Remy had let her come by the club that last weekend, just for one drink. “Promise, I’ll go home right after,” Claudia had giggled, arms looped around Remy’s shoulders.
But Claudia never made it home. She never made it anywhere, really.
The weight settled on Remy’s chest, fierce and burning. Her hand wobbled. Then—snap! The glass cracked in half, sharp and cold, slicing her palm. A dozen more tumbled from the stack, rolling off the bar and shattering with a thunderclap. Shards glittered on the hardwood floor.
Remy sucked in a breath, but it came out as a strangled gasp. She planted her fists on the sticky countertop, fighting back tears.
“Hey, Remy!” A gentle hand touched her back. It was Taneesha, her bar manager—maternal, never hurried, mother of three. She reached past Remy for the spray bottle and towel. Miguel, one of the bouncers, came running with a dustpan, voice low and soothing. Within seconds, the team swarmed around her, shielding her from the growing mess.
“Just glass, boss. We’ve got it,” Taneesha murmured, moving Remy aside. Miguel swept up the debris, a soft apology in his eyes.
Remy pressed a dishtowel to her bleeding palm, embarrassment prickling her cheeks. “Sorry—I’m—just clumsy tonight.”
But Taneesha said, “Happens to the best of us. Go breathe for a second. Miguel and I will handle this.”
She tried to resist. “No, it’s alright—”
But they insisted, and Remy slipped out the side door into the alley. Her breath came sharp, burning the cool night air in her lungs, the noise of traffic humming beyond the dumpsters. She pressed her back to the brick and let herself slide down until she sat in the dust, knees folded to her chest.
Two years, and Claudia was still everywhere and nowhere. The police had said “No leads.” The flyers curled at the edges. Witnesses remembered nothing. Most nights, Remy hid Claudia’s ghost behind the pounding bass and strobe lights, letting the river of nightlife wash her clean. But sometimes the mask cracked.
Warmth joined her—a coat laid carefully across her shoulders. It was Taneesha again, studying Remy with kind, appraising eyes.
“She really loved this place,” Remy whispered. “I think she’d have torn up the dance floor tonight.”
“I know she would,” Taneesha replied. “But you do what she would’ve done—stand back up. Keep going. Club’s not gonna run itself.”
Remy nodded. Together, they re-entered the glowing throat of Pulse. The bar glimmered again—glasses replaced, mirrors shining. Miguel nodded to her from the entrance, muscle and kindness mingled in his posture. The kitchen clattered with the sounds of ice buckets and laughter. Staff clustered around, tension already dissolving into the familiar adrenaline of showtime.
Remy dabbed at her palm, wrapping a neon pink bandage around the cut. The playlist shifted, and the bass pounded, irresistible. She steeled herself, letting the energy surge back into her limbs—the club’s pulse was her own now, and Claudia’s, too.
As the first guests filtered inside, faces flushed with anticipation, Remy straightened, forcing a welcoming smile. The show must go on, even with a heavy heart.
Later, under the flicker of disco lights, Remy poured drinks and nodded along with the music, laughing with the regulars, every glass she filled another small act of hope. Even now, she searched every new face, every fresh laugh—always, somewhere inside her, shining with Claudia’s memory, refusing, even after two long years, to give up.
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Prompt: Write a long story about a young nightclub owner whose younger sister mysteriously disappears two years ago. Describe how the young owner was preparing the club for an evening of partying when she suddenly broke down thinking about her sister and broke the glasses. Describe how the staff helped her clean up and how she prepared the club for guests.
Response: The radiant neon sign of “Pulse” flickered to life as a sullen dusk dragged itself across the city. Underneath it, Remy Santoro eyed her phone, watching the time click down to opening hour. Another Friday, another crowd to please. She stood behind the counter, sleeves rolled up, steam wafting from buckets as she sterilized the glittering stemware. The synth-pop bass line pumping through the club’s surround sound vibrated rhythmically through the lacquered bar. Summer air slipped in from the open back doors, carrying a whiff of traffic and the distant honking of impatient cab drivers. For Remy, the routine would have felt almost soothing—memories transmuted into muscle memory, her hands moving faster than her thoughts: flick, dip, wipe, stack. Someone had spray painted a mural of swirling abstract shapes and ghostly faces across the back wall the week she took ownership, one month after Claudia vanished. Remy never bothered repainting it, though she hated how the hollow eyes seemed fixed on her every night. She tried to focus on the night ahead. The playlist was set. The VIP tables dusted and glimmering under the track lights. Crystal clear bottle service menus aligned with military precision. Staff jackets ironed. But the tranquil momentum betrayed her; just as she reached for another glass, her hand began to tremble. She pictured Claudia’s favorite lipstick, half-forgotten in Remy’s clutch purse—bubblegum pink, with a stubborn flame mark on the tip. Claudia had only just turned twenty, barely legal, and already so wild about the world—she was always swooning over the impossible things. Dip-dye hair, jangling bracelets, a voice too big for her crackling frame. Remy had let her come by the club that last weekend, just for one drink. “Promise, I’ll go home right after,” Claudia had giggled, arms looped around Remy’s shoulders. But Claudia never made it home. She never made it anywhere, really. The weight settled on Remy’s chest, fierce and burning. Her hand wobbled. Then—snap! The glass cracked in half, sharp and cold, slicing her palm. A dozen more tumbled from the stack, rolling off the bar and shattering with a thunderclap. Shards glittered on the hardwood floor. Remy sucked in a breath, but it came out as a strangled gasp. She planted her fists on the sticky countertop, fighting back tears. “Hey, Remy!” A gentle hand touched her back. It was Taneesha, her bar manager—maternal, never hurried, mother of three. She reached past Remy for the spray bottle and towel. Miguel, one of the bouncers, came running with a dustpan, voice low and soothing. Within seconds, the team swarmed around her, shielding her from the growing mess. “Just glass, boss. We’ve got it,” Taneesha murmured, moving Remy aside. Miguel swept up the debris, a soft apology in his eyes. Remy pressed a dishtowel to her bleeding palm, embarrassment prickling her cheeks. “Sorry—I’m—just clumsy tonight.” But Taneesha said, “Happens to the best of us. Go breathe for a second. Miguel and I will handle this.” She tried to resist. “No, it’s alright—” But they insisted, and Remy slipped out the side door into the alley. Her breath came sharp, burning the cool night air in her lungs, the noise of traffic humming beyond the dumpsters. She pressed her back to the brick and let herself slide down until she sat in the dust, knees folded to her chest. Two years, and Claudia was still everywhere and nowhere. The police had said “No leads.” The flyers curled at the edges. Witnesses remembered nothing. Most nights, Remy hid Claudia’s ghost behind the pounding bass and strobe lights, letting the river of nightlife wash her clean. But sometimes the mask cracked. Warmth joined her—a coat laid carefully across her shoulders. It was Taneesha again, studying Remy with kind, appraising eyes. “She really loved this place,” Remy whispered. “I think she’d have torn up the dance floor tonight.” “I know she would,” Taneesha replied. “But you do what she would’ve done—stand back up. Keep going. Club’s not gonna run itself.” Remy nodded. Together, they re-entered the glowing throat of Pulse. The bar glimmered again—glasses replaced, mirrors shining. Miguel nodded to her from the entrance, muscle and kindness mingled in his posture. The kitchen clattered with the sounds of ice buckets and laughter. Staff clustered around, tension already dissolving into the familiar adrenaline of showtime. Remy dabbed at her palm, wrapping a neon pink bandage around the cut. The playlist shifted, and the bass pounded, irresistible. She steeled herself, letting the energy surge back into her limbs—the club’s pulse was her own now, and Claudia’s, too. As the first guests filtered inside, faces flushed with anticipation, Remy straightened, forcing a welcoming smile. The show must go on, even with a heavy heart. Later, under the flicker of disco lights, Remy poured drinks and nodded along with the music, laughing with the regulars, every glass she filled another small act of hope. Even now, she searched every new face, every fresh laugh—always, somewhere inside her, shining with Claudia’s memory, refusing, even after two long years, to give up.
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