The bass pulsed through the foundation, a low, insistent heartbeat that rattled glasses in the kitchen and scattered the shadows on Olivia’s bedroom walls. The club beneath her apartment—her inheritance, her livelihood, and her purgatory—had just come alive for the night, but Olivia Costa was marooned above it in a still, cold emptiness.
It had been that way for a year—354 days, to be exact. The same number she had written at the top of the crime board now dominating one whole wall of her living room. Evidence pinned in tidy rows, threaded together with colored strings as if, by weaving and reweaving, her sister Isabel might somehow be pulled back into existence.
Tonight, Olivia didn’t stand alone by her mosaic of loss. An FBI agent—sent after a fresh tip, she supposed, though it was rare these days for someone to care—circled the perimeter of the room, pausing often to squint at a photo or sticky note, head tilted in quiet concentration. He carried his silence like a shield, absorbing details, suspicion, and perhaps even pain, without showing a hint of what was happening behind his steady, dark eyes.
She watched him warily. He looked young, no more than thirty, with a pale, thoughtful face. A lock of brown hair slipped forward as he leaned in to study Isabel’s last photograph—a blurry snapshot Olivia had taken on the rooftop, both of them laughing over spilled beer. Isabel’s hand waved at the lens, long fingers catching the sun.
Most detectives talked. They tried to connect with her, softening their voices and murmuring reassurances. They asked about Isabel’s boyfriends, her choice to come home that night from college, whether she ever seemed sad, whether Olivia and Isabel were close. Sometimes, when Olivia pressed them—Did you see her phone records? What about that cab driver?—they got tense, then distant, then disappeared from her life as quickly as Isabel herself had done.
This agent hadn’t offered hope, or platitudes, or even his name.
After a time, Olivia couldn’t bear the silence. “You can take anything you want, Agent,” she said quietly. “Photos, charts, notebooks—it’s all copies. I keep the originals at my parents’ place. If you need somewhere to stay…” she hesitated, not sure why she was offering, “my parents run a boarding house by the river. You’d be welcome there.”
The agent turned at last. The uncertainty left Olivia’s voice, replaced by something harder, sharper. “We’ve had a year of detectives tramping through here. Cold cases, psychics, internet sleuths, everyone but someone who actually means it. Why are you here now?”
The agent met her gaze. “New evidence came in last week,” he said, voice even and calm. “It suggests Isabel’s disappearance may be tied to a string of missing persons cases along the state line. Your information is thorough.” He glanced at the wall, then back at Olivia, and she caught a glimmer of admiration. “Very thorough.”
Olivia nodded, heart pounding. Hope and anger wove through her, quick as electricity. “She’s not dead,” she said, stubbornly. “She’s out there. She didn’t just run off. I know her.”
“I believe you,” he said.
It was three simple words, but they rearranged the air in the room. Olivia brushed a strand of black hair from her brow, fighting the urge to believe in him. She forced herself to focus.
“I have keys to her apartment. I’ve kept everything the way it was the night she left.” She fished in a drawer for the battered spare set, but her hand trembled. Grief was a physical thing—lodged in her ribs, weighing down her arms, making her eyes ache. She could remember that night so vividly: the pounding music below, Isabel promising she’d be home in time for midnight drinks. She could remember the taste of gin on her tongue, the anxiety that had bubbled up uncontrollably after 12:00 came and went.
She pressed her eyes shut. No tears. Not now. Footsteps sounded behind her, and the agent, for the first time, looked uncertain. The silence stretched, thick and awkward.
“I’ll make arrangements with the guesthouse,” Olivia managed, her voice soft. She swiped up her phone, stepping aside to the kitchen. The music below shifted, some new pop anthem, and moments later her mother answered, her voice tired but kind.
“Ma? It’s me. I, um, I’ve got an FBI agent here. He’ll be coming by soon. Can you—can he stay with you guys? Yeah…right. No, I’m fine… Thank you.”
She glanced up. The agent waited by the evidence wall, arms folded, eyes darting across the lines and circles she’d so painstakingly drawn.
When Olivia returned, she found herself blurting out the question she’d wanted to avoid. “Do you really think this will make a difference?” She hated the waver in her voice, the childish hope that still hadn’t died.
The agent studied her for a long moment. “Most cases like this go cold after a year,” he said, his tone blunt but not cruel. “But there’s a pattern here—a reason your sister might still be alive. May I ask—do you remember anyone watching her? Anyone lingering outside the club?”
Olivia hesitated. “There were always men watching her. Pretty girls are never left alone,” she said, voice bitter. “But…there was someone. The week before, a man. Older, maybe fifty. He just stood at the bar and stared. I asked the bartender to tell him to leave. He did, but…I haven’t seen him since.”
“Do you have the bar’s security footage from back then?”
“Yes. I kept everything,” she said, almost feverishly. She ducked into a side room and returned with a battered laptop, balancing stacks of old hard drives. The FBI agent quickly gathered them, handling it all with surprising care.
She stared at him, unsure. He wasn’t like the others. He hadn’t smiled or patronized her, but he didn’t look away when she cried, either. There was a gentleness in his silence, a respect for what she’d endured.
“I’ll review these tonight,” he said, tucking the laptop under one arm. He paused at the door, turning back. “I meant it. I believe you. Sometimes, when a case doesn’t sit right, when the pattern changes—it means something. Let yourself rest for once.”
His words sat with her after he left, a fragile, dangerous comfort. When the music downstairs faded in the early morning, and Olivia curled up next to the wall of evidence, she allowed herself—just briefly—to imagine Isabel coming home. A year late, but smiling, saying something sarcastic about Olivia’s crime-board obsession.
And for the first time since her sister’s absence, she slept without nightmares—buoyed, despite everything, by the slim certainty that this agent might retrieve what the darkness had taken.
---
The next day, Olivia woke to early sunlight and a new, unsettling energy in the apartment. She poured coffee and stared out at the city, her mind flitting between dread and anticipation—what if the footage revealed nothing? What if it was already too late?
Her phone buzzed. A text from her mother: Your agent is polite. Quiet type. He left very early after breakfast.
Just as she set down her mug, a knock rattled her door. Olivia hesitated, then answered. The agent stood on her threshold, a folder tucked under one arm. This time, he met her gaze directly.
“I found something,” he said quietly.
In the seconds that followed, as hope and terror collided inside her, Olivia understood that the story of her sister was not over. The darkness that had hovered above her for a year shifted, and in its place came a thin line of light—the start of a path leading out, or in, to the mystery that had upended her life.
She squared her shoulders. “Tell me everything,” she told the agent.
He nodded, and together, they crossed into the unraveling of Isabel’s fate—the first real beginning Olivia had dared to hope for in a year.
This story was generated by user kitty.cat07 with assistance by one of OpenAI’s large-scale language-generation model; prompts used to help generate the story are shown below.
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Prompt: Write a long story about a young nightclub owner who was standing in her apartment above the club with an FBI agent, to whom he offered to show up to find her sister, who had disappeared a year ago. Describe how she struggled with loss and suffered. Man stood in her apartment and silently looked through the evidence on the walls. The young nightclub owner watched him and noticed that he was different from the other policemen and detectives she worked with. She looked young for an FBI agent. When he finally spoke to her, the young woman offered to take everything he was interested in with him and even offered to let him stay with her parents, who ran a boarding house. She stepped aside and took out her phone and then called her mother, informing her that the agent would show up at their guesthouse.
Response: The bass pulsed through the foundation, a low, insistent heartbeat that rattled glasses in the kitchen and scattered the shadows on Olivia’s bedroom walls. The club beneath her apartment—her inheritance, her livelihood, and her purgatory—had just come alive for the night, but Olivia Costa was marooned above it in a still, cold emptiness. It had been that way for a year—354 days, to be exact. The same number she had written at the top of the crime board now dominating one whole wall of her living room. Evidence pinned in tidy rows, threaded together with colored strings as if, by weaving and reweaving, her sister Isabel might somehow be pulled back into existence. Tonight, Olivia didn’t stand alone by her mosaic of loss. An FBI agent—sent after a fresh tip, she supposed, though it was rare these days for someone to care—circled the perimeter of the room, pausing often to squint at a photo or sticky note, head tilted in quiet concentration. He carried his silence like a shield, absorbing details, suspicion, and perhaps even pain, without showing a hint of what was happening behind his steady, dark eyes. She watched him warily. He looked young, no more than thirty, with a pale, thoughtful face. A lock of brown hair slipped forward as he leaned in to study Isabel’s last photograph—a blurry snapshot Olivia had taken on the rooftop, both of them laughing over spilled beer. Isabel’s hand waved at the lens, long fingers catching the sun. Most detectives talked. They tried to connect with her, softening their voices and murmuring reassurances. They asked about Isabel’s boyfriends, her choice to come home that night from college, whether she ever seemed sad, whether Olivia and Isabel were close. Sometimes, when Olivia pressed them—Did you see her phone records? What about that cab driver?—they got tense, then distant, then disappeared from her life as quickly as Isabel herself had done. This agent hadn’t offered hope, or platitudes, or even his name. After a time, Olivia couldn’t bear the silence. “You can take anything you want, Agent,” she said quietly. “Photos, charts, notebooks—it’s all copies. I keep the originals at my parents’ place. If you need somewhere to stay…” she hesitated, not sure why she was offering, “my parents run a boarding house by the river. You’d be welcome there.” The agent turned at last. The uncertainty left Olivia’s voice, replaced by something harder, sharper. “We’ve had a year of detectives tramping through here. Cold cases, psychics, internet sleuths, everyone but someone who actually means it. Why are you here now?” The agent met her gaze. “New evidence came in last week,” he said, voice even and calm. “It suggests Isabel’s disappearance may be tied to a string of missing persons cases along the state line. Your information is thorough.” He glanced at the wall, then back at Olivia, and she caught a glimmer of admiration. “Very thorough.” Olivia nodded, heart pounding. Hope and anger wove through her, quick as electricity. “She’s not dead,” she said, stubbornly. “She’s out there. She didn’t just run off. I know her.” “I believe you,” he said. It was three simple words, but they rearranged the air in the room. Olivia brushed a strand of black hair from her brow, fighting the urge to believe in him. She forced herself to focus. “I have keys to her apartment. I’ve kept everything the way it was the night she left.” She fished in a drawer for the battered spare set, but her hand trembled. Grief was a physical thing—lodged in her ribs, weighing down her arms, making her eyes ache. She could remember that night so vividly: the pounding music below, Isabel promising she’d be home in time for midnight drinks. She could remember the taste of gin on her tongue, the anxiety that had bubbled up uncontrollably after 12:00 came and went. She pressed her eyes shut. No tears. Not now. Footsteps sounded behind her, and the agent, for the first time, looked uncertain. The silence stretched, thick and awkward. “I’ll make arrangements with the guesthouse,” Olivia managed, her voice soft. She swiped up her phone, stepping aside to the kitchen. The music below shifted, some new pop anthem, and moments later her mother answered, her voice tired but kind. “Ma? It’s me. I, um, I’ve got an FBI agent here. He’ll be coming by soon. Can you—can he stay with you guys? Yeah…right. No, I’m fine… Thank you.” She glanced up. The agent waited by the evidence wall, arms folded, eyes darting across the lines and circles she’d so painstakingly drawn. When Olivia returned, she found herself blurting out the question she’d wanted to avoid. “Do you really think this will make a difference?” She hated the waver in her voice, the childish hope that still hadn’t died. The agent studied her for a long moment. “Most cases like this go cold after a year,” he said, his tone blunt but not cruel. “But there’s a pattern here—a reason your sister might still be alive. May I ask—do you remember anyone watching her? Anyone lingering outside the club?” Olivia hesitated. “There were always men watching her. Pretty girls are never left alone,” she said, voice bitter. “But…there was someone. The week before, a man. Older, maybe fifty. He just stood at the bar and stared. I asked the bartender to tell him to leave. He did, but…I haven’t seen him since.” “Do you have the bar’s security footage from back then?” “Yes. I kept everything,” she said, almost feverishly. She ducked into a side room and returned with a battered laptop, balancing stacks of old hard drives. The FBI agent quickly gathered them, handling it all with surprising care. She stared at him, unsure. He wasn’t like the others. He hadn’t smiled or patronized her, but he didn’t look away when she cried, either. There was a gentleness in his silence, a respect for what she’d endured. “I’ll review these tonight,” he said, tucking the laptop under one arm. He paused at the door, turning back. “I meant it. I believe you. Sometimes, when a case doesn’t sit right, when the pattern changes—it means something. Let yourself rest for once.” His words sat with her after he left, a fragile, dangerous comfort. When the music downstairs faded in the early morning, and Olivia curled up next to the wall of evidence, she allowed herself—just briefly—to imagine Isabel coming home. A year late, but smiling, saying something sarcastic about Olivia’s crime-board obsession. And for the first time since her sister’s absence, she slept without nightmares—buoyed, despite everything, by the slim certainty that this agent might retrieve what the darkness had taken. --- The next day, Olivia woke to early sunlight and a new, unsettling energy in the apartment. She poured coffee and stared out at the city, her mind flitting between dread and anticipation—what if the footage revealed nothing? What if it was already too late? Her phone buzzed. A text from her mother: Your agent is polite. Quiet type. He left very early after breakfast. Just as she set down her mug, a knock rattled her door. Olivia hesitated, then answered. The agent stood on her threshold, a folder tucked under one arm. This time, he met her gaze directly. “I found something,” he said quietly. In the seconds that followed, as hope and terror collided inside her, Olivia understood that the story of her sister was not over. The darkness that had hovered above her for a year shifted, and in its place came a thin line of light—the start of a path leading out, or in, to the mystery that had upended her life. She squared her shoulders. “Tell me everything,” she told the agent. He nodded, and together, they crossed into the unraveling of Isabel’s fate—the first real beginning Olivia had dared to hope for in a year.
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