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A young boy named Ethan swaps bodies with his friend's Hispanic mother, Maria, in a supermarket. Maria revels in her newfound youth while Ethan struggles with the unfamiliarities of Maria's body and life. His friend Mateo tries to navigate the situation as onlookers watch the chaotic scene unfold.
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1. 1. The automatic doors of the Treetop Grocery slid open with a gentle whoosh.
2. 2. Four people walked inside together: a boy, his friend, his friend’s older sister, and his friend’s mom.
3. 3. The boy’s name was Ethan Miller.
4. 4. Ethan was seven years old.
5. 5. Ethan was born in 2017.
6. 6. He was white.
7. 7. Ethan was short for his age, about 3’10”.
8. 8. He weighed 55 pounds.
9. 9. Ethan’s hair was straight, short, and dirty blond.
10. 10. He had blue eyes.
11. 11. Today Ethan wore a faded red Mario t-shirt.
12. 12. He had light blue shorts with a dinosaur print.
13. 13. On his feet, he wore green Crocs.
14. 14. With him was his best friend, Mateo Alvarez.
15. 15. Mateo was eight years old.
16. 16. Mateo was born in 2016.
17. 17. Mateo was Hispanic.
18. 18. Mateo was 4’2”.
19. 19. He weighed 63 pounds.
20. 20. Mateo’s hair was wavy, black, and cut in a bowl style.
21. 21. Mateo had big brown eyes.
22. 22. He wore a white tank top with a blue soccer ball and dark gray cargo shorts.
23. 23. On his feet were well-worn blue and red Velcro sneakers.
24. 24. Mateo’s older sister was named Lucia Alvarez.
25. 25. Lucia was 15 years old.
26. 26. Lucia was born in 2008.
27. 27. Lucia was Hispanic as well.
28. 28. She was 5’6”.
29. 29. She weighed 123 pounds.
30. 30. Lucia’s hair was shoulder-length, thick, and dark brown.
31. 31. She often wore her hair in two French braids.
32. 32. Lucia’s eyes were brown, just like Mateo’s.
33. 33. Today, Lucia wore a pale yellow crop top and ripped black jeans.
34. 34. Her black high-top Converse looked nearly brand new.
35. 35. Over her shoulder, she carried a small purple backpack.
36. 36. The matriarch of the group—Mateo and Lucia’s mother—walked beside them.
37. 37. Her name was Maria Alvarez.
38. 38. Maria was 52 years old.
39. 39. She was born in 1972.
40. 40. Maria was a proud Hispanic woman.
41. 41. She stood at 5’2”.
42. 42. Maria weighed 300 pounds.
43. 43. Her hair was long, thick, black, and always wound tightly into a bun at the back of her head.
44. 44. She had warm brown eyes, lined with laugh lines.
45. 45. Maria wore a light blue tank top that clung to her frame and faded denim shorts that stopped mid-thigh.
46. 46. She wore solid black flip flops, her feet wide and sturdy.
47. 47. Her toenails were meticulously painted bright red.
48. 48. A simple gold wedding ring sparkled on her left ring finger.
49. 49. Large gold hoop earrings dangled from her ears.
50. 50. On her left shoulder hung a large brown purse.
51. 51. Resting atop her head, more as an accessory than for actual use, were big black sunglasses.
52. 52. Maria smiled at everyone as she strode forward, her flip flops making slapping sounds against the floor.
53. 53. “We grab butter, milk, eggs, and—you kids wan’ snacks? We get snacks, okay,” she said, her voice full of warmth and slight struggle with the English words.
54. 54. “Yes, snacks!” Mateo exclaimed, his eyes lighting up.
55. 55. Ethan held onto the shopping cart, glancing at the mountain of candy he could never have at home.
56. 56. Lucia rolled her eyes but secretly enjoyed grocery trips with her family.
57. 57. “Can we get Takis, Ma?” Lucia asked, smirking at her little brother.
58. 58. “Takis, sure, sure, las Takis, ah?” Maria said with a broad grin.
59. 59. “My mom never lets me have those,” Ethan whispered to Mateo.
60. 60. “Today we get everything!” Mateo announced, a little too loudly.
61. 61. They passed through the produce section, the family’s laughter echoing off the tile.
62. 62. Maria stopped suddenly, making them all halt before mountains of shiny apples and oranges.
63. 63. “Wait, wait…don’ touch nothin’,” Maria declared, lifting a hand for silence.
64. 64. Ethan’s hand hovered precariously above a pyramid of Granny Smith apples.
65. 65. Lucia impatiently tapped her Converse against the tile.
66. 66. Mateo’s eyes darted between his mother and the apples.
67. 67. “What’s wrong, Ma?” Lucia asked.
68. 68. Maria looked very serious all of a sudden, a stark contrast with her usually jolly expression.
69. 69. She clapped her hands twice, drawing the group’s attention.
70. 70. “Okay, okay—I got somethin’ to seh,” Maria said in her thickly accented, broken English, her words slurring together.
71. 71. “I need you all pay attention, yes?”
72. 72. Everyone nodded in unison, the kids’ eyes wide with concern and confusion.
73. 73. “Dis berry important—so, listen good,” Maria continued, looking each of them in the eye.
74. 74. “I ganna choose one a you right now—like, random—to swap bodies with me. For-eh-ver.”
75. 75. Lucia’s jaw dropped open.
76. 76. Mateo blinked, trying to decide if he heard correctly.
77. 77. “I want no more nuttin’ to do wit’ my husband, I just want new life. Soo…one ah you get dis,” Maria finished with a grand, exasperated gesture.
78. 78. Lucia’s voice trembled as she half-laughed, “Wait, like, ONLY between me and Mateo, right, you’re not including Ethan?”
79. 79. Lucia looked nervously at Maria, hoping her mother would exclude Ethan from this strange proposal.
80. 80. Maria shook her head, her gold earrings bobbing.
81. 81. “No, no, I includin’ even Ethan. I got no problem with he swappin’! He get my body, my accent, everyt’ing!” she said, grinning, her broken English more apparent.
82. 82. Ethan went pale as a sheet, clutching the edge of the shopping cart.
83. 83. Even Lucia and Mateo looked horrified.
84. 84. Maria reached into her purse and pulled out a battered pack of playing cards.
85. 85. “Hier, this fair. All pick one card, low card swap wit’ me, okay?” Maria said, fanning out the cards.
86. 86. Ethan’s hands trembled as he drew a card.
87. 87. Mateo gulped and took his card, Lucia following.
88. 88. Maria took the last.
89. 89. “Show, show your cards!” Maria exclaimed.
90. 90. Ethan slowly lifted his card—a two of hearts.
91. 91. Mateo had pulled a five.
92. 92. Lucia, nervously, revealed an eight.
93. 93. Maria’s hand shook as she flipped her card—a Queen.
94. 94. The kids stared at Ethan, eyes wide and mouths agape.
95. 95. “Ethan, you get my life now. Good luck, chico,” Maria said, her voice oddly sad yet relieved, still thick with her broken English.
96. 96. Ethan began stuttering, “Wait, please—no, this isn’t—”
97. 97. Maria raised her hand in a dramatic flourish.
98. 98. “Dis is it. Is final!” she declared.
99. 99. The air around them seemed to shimmer, the fruit stands and produce going blurry.
100. 100. Lucia gasped as tendrils of silvery energy lifted from Maria and Ethan’s bodies.
101. 101. For an instant, their eyes locked—Ethan’s filled with fear, Maria’s with hope.
102. 102. Lucia and Mateo took a frightened step back, feeling an eerie breeze pass through their hair.
103. 103. Two ghostly figures uncoiled from their chests, swirling in the air above them.
104. 104. The figures, visible only for a heartbeat, darted into each other’s bodies—Maria’s soul entering Ethan, and Ethan’s entering Maria.
105. 105. Something cold and foreign filled Ethan’s mind; everything smelled like unfamiliar perfume and supermarket produce.
106. 106. He looked down and saw unfamiliar hands—thick fingers, gold ring glinting, nails painted red.
107. 107. Everything about him felt heavy, strange, and foreign—the tank top, the denim shorts, the flip flops slapping under feet now so wide and stiff.
108. 108. He could feel a weight on his left shoulder—the purse.
109. 109. Something also tugged at his head—he reached up, feeling the sunglasses on his forehead and the tight bun of hair holding strong.
110. 110. The world now seemed much smaller—he could see way more people over the fruit stands with his taller, wider form.
111. 111. Everything even sounded different; his tongue itself felt bigger in his mouth.
112. 112. “Wha… what happened?” Ethan heard himself say, but his voice was now thick with Maria’s accent, stumbling through broken English. “O dios…is me…no, is Maria…no…”
113. 113. Mateo stumbled forward, grabbing Ethan’s arm—only now it was Maria’s arm.
114. 114. “Ethan? Is that you?” he squeaked.
115. 115. “Sí… I mean yes… no… I don’ like dis… I don like…” Ethan tried to say, flustered by the sounds of words escaping his now awkward lips.
116. 116. Maria—now in Ethan’s young body—giggled with delight.
117. 117. She flexed her little fingers, enjoying their lightness.
118. 118. She reached up to touch her blond hair, marveling at the soft, straight strands.
119. 119. Maria wriggled in the green Crocs, swinging her feet around.
120. 120. “I feel… wow… this is easy… everything is easy to move!” Maria-in-Ethan’s-body cheered.
121. 121. Lucia stared at her little brother and her friend, and her mom—realizing whose soul was in what body.
122. 122. “Mom, you’re… you’re Ethan now. And, Ethan? You’re, like, my mom?” Lucia said, trying not to laugh or faint.
123. 123. “No, I no want dis!” Ethan wailed, his voice ringing out in Maria’s thick accent.
124. 124. He was acutely aware of every lump and curve, every pound of weight, every foreign sensation.
125. 125. Even walking was awkward—the flip flops squeaked louder under so much weight, and his feet spread with every step.
126. 126. His tank top stuck to him, uncomfortable under the store’s fluorescent lights.
127. 127. The purse weighed him down, and the sunglasses kept sliding down his sweat-slick forehead.
128. 128. “Lucia—help. Please! I don’ wan’ this—why?” Ethan pleaded, tripping over his new feet as he tried to move.
129. 129. Lucia retreated another step, unsure whether to reach out or to laugh at the absurdity.
130. 130. Maria—now a seven-year-old—danced around, picking up apples with Ethan’s small hands.
131. 131. “Oh! So light, so quick! I like!” Maria said, in perfect English now, the accent entirely gone.
132. 132. Mateo looked from Ethan to Maria back to his sister, his jaw slack in disbelief.
133. 133. “Ma, you can’t actually keep Ethan’s body! That’s so wrong!” he protested firmly.
134. 134. “Why not? He don wanna be big lady wit’ bun, flipflop, wedding ring. Dis body so fun,” Maria announced, now skipping through the produce aisle.
135. 135. Ethan tried to set down the purse, only to realize it was attached to his shoulder with no hope of sliding off gracefully.
136. 136. Just then, an employee in a bright green vest walked by.
137. 137. “Can I help you find something, ma’am?” the employee asked Ethan, seeing him fumbling confusedly with Maria’s purse straps.
138. 138. Ethan’s face flushed, not used to being called “ma’am.”
139. 139. He stammered, “Uh… n-no… is okay… I jus’ look’in for… dis produce…” struggling with every syllable in Maria’s accent.
140. 140. The employee gave him a strange look and walked on.
141. 141. “This is awful,” Ethan muttered. “I can’t even talk like myself…”
142. 142. Lucia leaned in, whispering, “Ethan, we have to fix this! You can’t stay as my mom forever, she’ll mess up your whole life!”
143. 143. Maria, meanwhile, had grabbed a bunch of bananas and started pretending they were a phone, making Mateo laugh with her antics.
144. 144. “Hola? Dis is Maria. No wait, dis is Ethan now!” she chirped into the banana, speaking playful English.
145. 145. “Stop dat!” Ethan snapped, waving an arm and almost dropping the purse in the process.
146. 146. The purse’s contents clattered—wallet, keys, loose Tic Tacs, and a crumpled receipt.
147. 147. Three shoppers paused to look at the strange spectacle of Maria-in-Ethan’s-body calling on bananas and Ethan-in-Maria’s-body flailing.
148. 148. Lucia tried to shush her mother—now in Ethan’s body—before an even bigger scene erupted.
149. 149. “Mom, please, can you swap us back now?” she hissed.
150. 150. “Nope! Dis swap for-eh-ver. I told you, I don’ want no more to do wit’ my husband. Is nice bein’ young again,” Maria declared, sticking her tongue out at Lucia.
151. 151. Ethan panicked, feeling trapped, hot, and deeply uncomfortable.
152. 152. “I can’t be a grown-up! I got school tomorrow! I can’t wear these shoes, I can’t even walk right!” he lamented, teetering as his flip flops nearly tripped him again.
153. 153. Maria giggled, her new (and much younger) face bright and eager.
154. 154. Mateo, remembering their purpose, tried to take charge.
155. 155. “Uh, okay, mom—er, Ethan—er, y’know what? Let’s just get the snacks and talk about this at home, okay? People are starting to stare,” Mateo suggested.
156. 156. Ethan nodded weakly, drawing the cart behind him with all the might Maria’s body could muster.
157. 157. Even the action of holding the cart handle felt strange—his hands were puffy and fingers decorated with painted nails.
158. 158. Moving felt like wading through syrup.
159. 159. Maria led them enthusiastically through the aisles, tossing cookies and chips into the cart with an energy Ethan had never seen from her before.
160. 160. Ethan tried to follow, but any time he quickened his step, his flip flops screamed against the linoleum and pinched his feet.
161. 161. “How do you walk in these?!” he muttered.
162. 162. When they paused by the cold drinks, Maria spun around, nearly bowling into Ethan.
163. 163. “Yay! Slushies! Can I get a slushie?” Maria begged, u

This story was generated by user manemansteve3 with assistance by one of OpenAI’s large-scale language-generation model; prompts used to help generate the story are shown below.

Images were generated with OpenAI's AI system, DALL·E 2, or uploaded by the user.

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Prompt: A long and thorough and detailed 240 sentences story in a formatted list of 1 to 240 about a boy with his friend and his friend's older sister and his friend's mom shopping at the grocery store and include the names of the 4, their ages with one of the boys being very young, have his friend be Hispanic, birthdays with the mom being in her 50s, birth years, heights, weights with the mom being 300 pounds, hair colors and styles with the mom always having her hair in a bun and eye colors and the boy whose with his friend's race being white and what they were wearing all being shoes and doing with the friend's mom wearing a tank top and denim shorts and solid black flip flops with her nails painted red and a wedding ring on her left ring finger and hoop earrings in her ears and a purse on her shoulder and sunglasses resting on her forehead. Have her speak in broken English in all her quoted texts spelling words wrong. Have her stop everyone letting them know she's got something to say and have it be in quoted text in broken English spelling words wrong. Have her say I'm going to randomly choose one of you guys to swap bodies with me permanently cause I want to have nothing to do with my husband and have it be in quoted text spelling words wrong. Have her oldest say I believe you mom but at the same time that's crazy between just me and my little brother right you're not including ____ and have it be in quoted text filling in the blanks with the boy's name. Have the mom say no I'm including him too I have no problem swapping bodies with him and swapping accents so he sounds like me and have it be in quoted text in broken English spelling words wrong. Have her randomly choose one of them as they all nervously looked at her. When she does body swap with one of them, have her soul leave her body and the other person's soul leave their body and have their souls enter each other's bodies. Have the person who ends up being the mom hate it. Continue the story from here.

Response: Certainly! Here is a formatted, detailed, and thorough story with 240 sentences, as requested, presented as a numbered list. The story contains all the specifics and occurrences you listed in your prompt. --- 1. 1. The automatic doors of the Treetop Grocery slid open with a gentle whoosh. 2. 2. Four people walked inside together: a boy, his friend, his friend’s older sister, and his friend’s mom. 3. 3. The boy’s name was Ethan Miller. 4. 4. Ethan was seven years old. 5. 5. Ethan was born in 2017. 6. 6. He was white. 7. 7. Ethan was short for his age, about 3’10”. 8. 8. He weighed 55 pounds. 9. 9. Ethan’s hair was straight, short, and dirty blond. 10. 10. He had blue eyes. 11. 11. Today Ethan wore a faded red Mario t-shirt. 12. 12. He had light blue shorts with a dinosaur print. 13. 13. On his feet, he wore green Crocs. 14. 14. With him was his best friend, Mateo Alvarez. 15. 15. Mateo was eight years old. 16. 16. Mateo was born in 2016. 17. 17. Mateo was Hispanic. 18. 18. Mateo was 4’2”. 19. 19. He weighed 63 pounds. 20. 20. Mateo’s hair was wavy, black, and cut in a bowl style. 21. 21. Mateo had big brown eyes. 22. 22. He wore a white tank top with a blue soccer ball and dark gray cargo shorts. 23. 23. On his feet were well-worn blue and red Velcro sneakers. 24. 24. Mateo’s older sister was named Lucia Alvarez. 25. 25. Lucia was 15 years old. 26. 26. Lucia was born in 2008. 27. 27. Lucia was Hispanic as well. 28. 28. She was 5’6”. 29. 29. She weighed 123 pounds. 30. 30. Lucia’s hair was shoulder-length, thick, and dark brown. 31. 31. She often wore her hair in two French braids. 32. 32. Lucia’s eyes were brown, just like Mateo’s. 33. 33. Today, Lucia wore a pale yellow crop top and ripped black jeans. 34. 34. Her black high-top Converse looked nearly brand new. 35. 35. Over her shoulder, she carried a small purple backpack. 36. 36. The matriarch of the group—Mateo and Lucia’s mother—walked beside them. 37. 37. Her name was Maria Alvarez. 38. 38. Maria was 52 years old. 39. 39. She was born in 1972. 40. 40. Maria was a proud Hispanic woman. 41. 41. She stood at 5’2”. 42. 42. Maria weighed 300 pounds. 43. 43. Her hair was long, thick, black, and always wound tightly into a bun at the back of her head. 44. 44. She had warm brown eyes, lined with laugh lines. 45. 45. Maria wore a light blue tank top that clung to her frame and faded denim shorts that stopped mid-thigh. 46. 46. She wore solid black flip flops, her feet wide and sturdy. 47. 47. Her toenails were meticulously painted bright red. 48. 48. A simple gold wedding ring sparkled on her left ring finger. 49. 49. Large gold hoop earrings dangled from her ears. 50. 50. On her left shoulder hung a large brown purse. 51. 51. Resting atop her head, more as an accessory than for actual use, were big black sunglasses. 52. 52. Maria smiled at everyone as she strode forward, her flip flops making slapping sounds against the floor. 53. 53. “We grab butter, milk, eggs, and—you kids wan’ snacks? We get snacks, okay,” she said, her voice full of warmth and slight struggle with the English words. 54. 54. “Yes, snacks!” Mateo exclaimed, his eyes lighting up. 55. 55. Ethan held onto the shopping cart, glancing at the mountain of candy he could never have at home. 56. 56. Lucia rolled her eyes but secretly enjoyed grocery trips with her family. 57. 57. “Can we get Takis, Ma?” Lucia asked, smirking at her little brother. 58. 58. “Takis, sure, sure, las Takis, ah?” Maria said with a broad grin. 59. 59. “My mom never lets me have those,” Ethan whispered to Mateo. 60. 60. “Today we get everything!” Mateo announced, a little too loudly. 61. 61. They passed through the produce section, the family’s laughter echoing off the tile. 62. 62. Maria stopped suddenly, making them all halt before mountains of shiny apples and oranges. 63. 63. “Wait, wait…don’ touch nothin’,” Maria declared, lifting a hand for silence. 64. 64. Ethan’s hand hovered precariously above a pyramid of Granny Smith apples. 65. 65. Lucia impatiently tapped her Converse against the tile. 66. 66. Mateo’s eyes darted between his mother and the apples. 67. 67. “What’s wrong, Ma?” Lucia asked. 68. 68. Maria looked very serious all of a sudden, a stark contrast with her usually jolly expression. 69. 69. She clapped her hands twice, drawing the group’s attention. 70. 70. “Okay, okay—I got somethin’ to seh,” Maria said in her thickly accented, broken English, her words slurring together. 71. 71. “I need you all pay attention, yes?” 72. 72. Everyone nodded in unison, the kids’ eyes wide with concern and confusion. 73. 73. “Dis berry important—so, listen good,” Maria continued, looking each of them in the eye. 74. 74. “I ganna choose one a you right now—like, random—to swap bodies with me. For-eh-ver.” 75. 75. Lucia’s jaw dropped open. 76. 76. Mateo blinked, trying to decide if he heard correctly. 77. 77. “I want no more nuttin’ to do wit’ my husband, I just want new life. Soo…one ah you get dis,” Maria finished with a grand, exasperated gesture. 78. 78. Lucia’s voice trembled as she half-laughed, “Wait, like, ONLY between me and Mateo, right, you’re not including Ethan?” 79. 79. Lucia looked nervously at Maria, hoping her mother would exclude Ethan from this strange proposal. 80. 80. Maria shook her head, her gold earrings bobbing. 81. 81. “No, no, I includin’ even Ethan. I got no problem with he swappin’! He get my body, my accent, everyt’ing!” she said, grinning, her broken English more apparent. 82. 82. Ethan went pale as a sheet, clutching the edge of the shopping cart. 83. 83. Even Lucia and Mateo looked horrified. 84. 84. Maria reached into her purse and pulled out a battered pack of playing cards. 85. 85. “Hier, this fair. All pick one card, low card swap wit’ me, okay?” Maria said, fanning out the cards. 86. 86. Ethan’s hands trembled as he drew a card. 87. 87. Mateo gulped and took his card, Lucia following. 88. 88. Maria took the last. 89. 89. “Show, show your cards!” Maria exclaimed. 90. 90. Ethan slowly lifted his card—a two of hearts. 91. 91. Mateo had pulled a five. 92. 92. Lucia, nervously, revealed an eight. 93. 93. Maria’s hand shook as she flipped her card—a Queen. 94. 94. The kids stared at Ethan, eyes wide and mouths agape. 95. 95. “Ethan, you get my life now. Good luck, chico,” Maria said, her voice oddly sad yet relieved, still thick with her broken English. 96. 96. Ethan began stuttering, “Wait, please—no, this isn’t—” 97. 97. Maria raised her hand in a dramatic flourish. 98. 98. “Dis is it. Is final!” she declared. 99. 99. The air around them seemed to shimmer, the fruit stands and produce going blurry. 100. 100. Lucia gasped as tendrils of silvery energy lifted from Maria and Ethan’s bodies. 101. 101. For an instant, their eyes locked—Ethan’s filled with fear, Maria’s with hope. 102. 102. Lucia and Mateo took a frightened step back, feeling an eerie breeze pass through their hair. 103. 103. Two ghostly figures uncoiled from their chests, swirling in the air above them. 104. 104. The figures, visible only for a heartbeat, darted into each other’s bodies—Maria’s soul entering Ethan, and Ethan’s entering Maria. 105. 105. Something cold and foreign filled Ethan’s mind; everything smelled like unfamiliar perfume and supermarket produce. 106. 106. He looked down and saw unfamiliar hands—thick fingers, gold ring glinting, nails painted red. 107. 107. Everything about him felt heavy, strange, and foreign—the tank top, the denim shorts, the flip flops slapping under feet now so wide and stiff. 108. 108. He could feel a weight on his left shoulder—the purse. 109. 109. Something also tugged at his head—he reached up, feeling the sunglasses on his forehead and the tight bun of hair holding strong. 110. 110. The world now seemed much smaller—he could see way more people over the fruit stands with his taller, wider form. 111. 111. Everything even sounded different; his tongue itself felt bigger in his mouth. 112. 112. “Wha… what happened?” Ethan heard himself say, but his voice was now thick with Maria’s accent, stumbling through broken English. “O dios…is me…no, is Maria…no…” 113. 113. Mateo stumbled forward, grabbing Ethan’s arm—only now it was Maria’s arm. 114. 114. “Ethan? Is that you?” he squeaked. 115. 115. “Sí… I mean yes… no… I don’ like dis… I don like…” Ethan tried to say, flustered by the sounds of words escaping his now awkward lips. 116. 116. Maria—now in Ethan’s young body—giggled with delight. 117. 117. She flexed her little fingers, enjoying their lightness. 118. 118. She reached up to touch her blond hair, marveling at the soft, straight strands. 119. 119. Maria wriggled in the green Crocs, swinging her feet around. 120. 120. “I feel… wow… this is easy… everything is easy to move!” Maria-in-Ethan’s-body cheered. 121. 121. Lucia stared at her little brother and her friend, and her mom—realizing whose soul was in what body. 122. 122. “Mom, you’re… you’re Ethan now. And, Ethan? You’re, like, my mom?” Lucia said, trying not to laugh or faint. 123. 123. “No, I no want dis!” Ethan wailed, his voice ringing out in Maria’s thick accent. 124. 124. He was acutely aware of every lump and curve, every pound of weight, every foreign sensation. 125. 125. Even walking was awkward—the flip flops squeaked louder under so much weight, and his feet spread with every step. 126. 126. His tank top stuck to him, uncomfortable under the store’s fluorescent lights. 127. 127. The purse weighed him down, and the sunglasses kept sliding down his sweat-slick forehead. 128. 128. “Lucia—help. Please! I don’ wan’ this—why?” Ethan pleaded, tripping over his new feet as he tried to move. 129. 129. Lucia retreated another step, unsure whether to reach out or to laugh at the absurdity. 130. 130. Maria—now a seven-year-old—danced around, picking up apples with Ethan’s small hands. 131. 131. “Oh! So light, so quick! I like!” Maria said, in perfect English now, the accent entirely gone. 132. 132. Mateo looked from Ethan to Maria back to his sister, his jaw slack in disbelief. 133. 133. “Ma, you can’t actually keep Ethan’s body! That’s so wrong!” he protested firmly. 134. 134. “Why not? He don wanna be big lady wit’ bun, flipflop, wedding ring. Dis body so fun,” Maria announced, now skipping through the produce aisle. 135. 135. Ethan tried to set down the purse, only to realize it was attached to his shoulder with no hope of sliding off gracefully. 136. 136. Just then, an employee in a bright green vest walked by. 137. 137. “Can I help you find something, ma’am?” the employee asked Ethan, seeing him fumbling confusedly with Maria’s purse straps. 138. 138. Ethan’s face flushed, not used to being called “ma’am.” 139. 139. He stammered, “Uh… n-no… is okay… I jus’ look’in for… dis produce…” struggling with every syllable in Maria’s accent. 140. 140. The employee gave him a strange look and walked on. 141. 141. “This is awful,” Ethan muttered. “I can’t even talk like myself…” 142. 142. Lucia leaned in, whispering, “Ethan, we have to fix this! You can’t stay as my mom forever, she’ll mess up your whole life!” 143. 143. Maria, meanwhile, had grabbed a bunch of bananas and started pretending they were a phone, making Mateo laugh with her antics. 144. 144. “Hola? Dis is Maria. No wait, dis is Ethan now!” she chirped into the banana, speaking playful English. 145. 145. “Stop dat!” Ethan snapped, waving an arm and almost dropping the purse in the process. 146. 146. The purse’s contents clattered—wallet, keys, loose Tic Tacs, and a crumpled receipt. 147. 147. Three shoppers paused to look at the strange spectacle of Maria-in-Ethan’s-body calling on bananas and Ethan-in-Maria’s-body flailing. 148. 148. Lucia tried to shush her mother—now in Ethan’s body—before an even bigger scene erupted. 149. 149. “Mom, please, can you swap us back now?” she hissed. 150. 150. “Nope! Dis swap for-eh-ver. I told you, I don’ want no more to do wit’ my husband. Is nice bein’ young again,” Maria declared, sticking her tongue out at Lucia. 151. 151. Ethan panicked, feeling trapped, hot, and deeply uncomfortable. 152. 152. “I can’t be a grown-up! I got school tomorrow! I can’t wear these shoes, I can’t even walk right!” he lamented, teetering as his flip flops nearly tripped him again. 153. 153. Maria giggled, her new (and much younger) face bright and eager. 154. 154. Mateo, remembering their purpose, tried to take charge. 155. 155. “Uh, okay, mom—er, Ethan—er, y’know what? Let’s just get the snacks and talk about this at home, okay? People are starting to stare,” Mateo suggested. 156. 156. Ethan nodded weakly, drawing the cart behind him with all the might Maria’s body could muster. 157. 157. Even the action of holding the cart handle felt strange—his hands were puffy and fingers decorated with painted nails. 158. 158. Moving felt like wading through syrup. 159. 159. Maria led them enthusiastically through the aisles, tossing cookies and chips into the cart with an energy Ethan had never seen from her before. 160. 160. Ethan tried to follow, but any time he quickened his step, his flip flops screamed against the linoleum and pinched his feet. 161. 161. “How do you walk in these?!” he muttered. 162. 162. When they paused by the cold drinks, Maria spun around, nearly bowling into Ethan. 163. 163. “Yay! Slushies! Can I get a slushie?” Maria begged, u

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