"Flight of Deception"
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Lee had prided herself on always knowing where she was. That was a function of her abilities: the sharpness like velvet and glass in her eyes, the tiny, crystalline sounds she could pick apart with her ears, even the air pressure as atmospheres shifted. Her senses never failed her, not even under duress. But as the helicopter blades beat a dizzying rhythm above her head, and the world below became a ribbon of river and forest, Lee felt unmoored for the first time.
They were supposed to be flying to Canada. It had to be Canada—the border was a promise, an escape from the dogged pursuit of their clones. It was a refuge, or so Elle had said. So Lee had clung to the plan while they ran across the abandoned industrial estate, clones hounding their footsteps, identical in every feature except the desperation in their eyes. Fear has a scent, Lee knew—a hot, metallic tang that rolled out of sweat glands and haunted the back of every shadow.
Now, the scent came from herself, pooling at the base of her neck as adrenaline ebbed and flowed. The wind outside the helicopter flicked at the edges of her hearing, and she tried to focus. Where were they? The engine whined a little off-key, an unfamiliar model, not what she expected for the cross-border run. Below them, yellow plains stretched—not the dense, rain-polished greens of the Canadian forests she’d memorized from every map.
Elle sat opposite her, eyes shrouded by sunglasses, lips twitching in a haunted smile. Lee could smell the lie; it was bitter, like aspirin crushed beneath a boot.
She tried to recall the layout of the region, every detail—temperature, humidity, even the static charge in the air whispered southern, not northern, not Canadian. The pilot—a man Elle called Mikhail—spoke with an accent that never once curved in the clipped way she associated with Montreal or Toronto. No radio chatter about border patrols, no sudden dip as they crossed over heavily-monitored lines.
Lee’s heart hammered fretfully, muscles twitching, every sense crying out in warning. Somehow, Elle had tricked her. Not to Canada. Somewhere else. Somewhere Lee’s mind could not immediately map.
She watched Elle with new eyes. The slight tension in her hands, the way she avoided meeting Lee’s gaze—these were tells. The helicopter made a turn and Lee’s sense of orientation swirled; her inner ear picked up the shallow banking and a pressure in her sinuses spoke of descending altitude. Not north; it felt east.
As the minutes passed, the hum of the engine dulled her thoughts, but the unease multiplied with every kilometer. Each vibration, every jostle, was a small betrayal. The world took on a sharper edge: the sweat on her collar, the salt-burn of tears she wouldn’t allow to shed, the tang of aviation fuel bleeding through the air vents.
Lee’s thoughts tumbled—had Elle always planned this? Did the clones know? Were they flying into an ambush, or had Elle simply lied to save them from another kind of danger? The questions pressed against her senses as tightly as the rotor noise thundered through her skull.
She could hear Elle’s breath, staged slow to hide panic, but once she caught a ragged hitch between inhales. It was deliberate—pretense stained every word.
"There was a change of plans," Elle finally admitted, voice steady but too soft. "Canada isn’t safe, Lee. Trust me."
But Lee could not trust easily, not anymore. Every instinct in her body screamed in alarm; every enhanced sense raw with betrayal. And yet—some small part of her, the old fragment that believed in allies, wanted to hope.
She pressed her forehead to the cold glass, watched the landscape unfurl, strange and unknown, below her. Her world was out of reach—her senses, always her shield, gave her nothing but more uncertainty.
As the helicopter sped further from where she thought safety lay, Lee vowed she would not be deceived again. Her senses might betray her heart, but she would not let fear blind her completely. And as she watched Elle, who’d saved her so many times before, Lee wondered if trust was sharper and more dangerous than any of the sense-wrought edges she’d ever known.
This story was generated by user jess.jessie0 with assistance by one of OpenAI’s large-scale language-generation model; prompts used to help generate the story are shown below.
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Prompt: Write a long story about how Lee's girl with enhanced senses was running away with her ally Elle from their clones who wanted to kill them. They were supposed to go to Canada, but her ally tricked her and they flew somewhere else by helicopter. Describe how Lee felt during the helicopter ride.
Response: Lee had prided herself on always knowing where she was. That was a function of her abilities: the sharpness like velvet and glass in her eyes, the tiny, crystalline sounds she could pick apart with her ears, even the air pressure as atmospheres shifted. Her senses never failed her, not even under duress. But as the helicopter blades beat a dizzying rhythm above her head, and the world below became a ribbon of river and forest, Lee felt unmoored for the first time. They were supposed to be flying to Canada. It had to be Canada—the border was a promise, an escape from the dogged pursuit of their clones. It was a refuge, or so Elle had said. So Lee had clung to the plan while they ran across the abandoned industrial estate, clones hounding their footsteps, identical in every feature except the desperation in their eyes. Fear has a scent, Lee knew—a hot, metallic tang that rolled out of sweat glands and haunted the back of every shadow. Now, the scent came from herself, pooling at the base of her neck as adrenaline ebbed and flowed. The wind outside the helicopter flicked at the edges of her hearing, and she tried to focus. Where were they? The engine whined a little off-key, an unfamiliar model, not what she expected for the cross-border run. Below them, yellow plains stretched—not the dense, rain-polished greens of the Canadian forests she’d memorized from every map. Elle sat opposite her, eyes shrouded by sunglasses, lips twitching in a haunted smile. Lee could smell the lie; it was bitter, like aspirin crushed beneath a boot. She tried to recall the layout of the region, every detail—temperature, humidity, even the static charge in the air whispered southern, not northern, not Canadian. The pilot—a man Elle called Mikhail—spoke with an accent that never once curved in the clipped way she associated with Montreal or Toronto. No radio chatter about border patrols, no sudden dip as they crossed over heavily-monitored lines. Lee’s heart hammered fretfully, muscles twitching, every sense crying out in warning. Somehow, Elle had tricked her. Not to Canada. Somewhere else. Somewhere Lee’s mind could not immediately map. She watched Elle with new eyes. The slight tension in her hands, the way she avoided meeting Lee’s gaze—these were tells. The helicopter made a turn and Lee’s sense of orientation swirled; her inner ear picked up the shallow banking and a pressure in her sinuses spoke of descending altitude. Not north; it felt east. As the minutes passed, the hum of the engine dulled her thoughts, but the unease multiplied with every kilometer. Each vibration, every jostle, was a small betrayal. The world took on a sharper edge: the sweat on her collar, the salt-burn of tears she wouldn’t allow to shed, the tang of aviation fuel bleeding through the air vents. Lee’s thoughts tumbled—had Elle always planned this? Did the clones know? Were they flying into an ambush, or had Elle simply lied to save them from another kind of danger? The questions pressed against her senses as tightly as the rotor noise thundered through her skull. She could hear Elle’s breath, staged slow to hide panic, but once she caught a ragged hitch between inhales. It was deliberate—pretense stained every word. "There was a change of plans," Elle finally admitted, voice steady but too soft. "Canada isn’t safe, Lee. Trust me." But Lee could not trust easily, not anymore. Every instinct in her body screamed in alarm; every enhanced sense raw with betrayal. And yet—some small part of her, the old fragment that believed in allies, wanted to hope. She pressed her forehead to the cold glass, watched the landscape unfurl, strange and unknown, below her. Her world was out of reach—her senses, always her shield, gave her nothing but more uncertainty. As the helicopter sped further from where she thought safety lay, Lee vowed she would not be deceived again. Her senses might betray her heart, but she would not let fear blind her completely. And as she watched Elle, who’d saved her so many times before, Lee wondered if trust was sharper and more dangerous than any of the sense-wrought edges she’d ever known.
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